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Post by Tally-Wa [crazy admin #1] on Jan 18, 2008 23:11:35 GMT -5
Just a description.
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Post by Kitty on Jan 22, 2008 20:00:43 GMT -5
I want to go through this!!! I'm learning new crap already!
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Post by Tally-Wa [crazy admin #1] on Jan 22, 2008 20:18:18 GMT -5
Fine, Kitty-Ca! Create a engaging, interesting character! There are NO limits. She/He could be a pie box waiting to be filled or something!
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Post by slytherindreamer on Jan 22, 2008 20:22:47 GMT -5
Mostly like this, right?: (This is JUST an interesing story,so I just started to think, and I wrote it down.) Name: Carly Meyers Age:16 Birthday:Dec.23, 1994 Description: Looks: Carly has stunning red-black hair that goes right down to her waist. Her dark red eyes glow in the dark sky. She has a large tattoo on her back that looks like The Virgin Mary. She is 130 lbs. and is 6'2. Her dark,olive skin shows off her Italian Bloodline. Mostly, she loves her body, but she is in her own little world. She is mostly a cutter and is a binge eater. She is addicted to Coke and mostly hates everyone. Her friends have been trying to help her, but again, she's in her own little world. Everything is perfect to her. Not for everyone else, though. History It all started with her parents' divorce. When she was little, her father became an alcoholic. When Carly was 4, her father started to abuse her mother, and her older sister. Of course, Carly was beaten too. She learned to keep quiet and to stay out of her father's way. 6 years later, her mother finally filed for divorce. Carly was sad to leave everything behind, with her mother, but was glad to get away from her father. When her mother, sister, and her moved, Carly started a new school. Of course, It wasn't easy. When she went into middle school, she only had really one friend. But when high school came around, Carly was all alone. With no friends, bad grades, and poor self-esteem, Carly started to cut herself. Then she started to binge. Mostly everything was going down hill for her. Soon she found a 'friend' who got her to start coke. She got addicted,and still she binged and cut. She started drama, and made real friends. Nobody really knew about her problem. Until they found her cutting herself in the school bathroom. They tried to help her, so did her mom and sister, but she just won't change. Carly wants to stay the same, and doesn't want help. God save her.
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Post by Tally-Wa [crazy admin #1] on Jan 22, 2008 20:32:55 GMT -5
First off, good try trying to make a character that has such deep problems. But it's not suggested to do something of that sort. Secondly, there's a thing called Spell Check that, when you click the 'reply' button and you have to do the LONG reply thingie, it helps out a lot! I use it all the time, so it's nothing. But just don't go for that sort of angle. You need more work with character building though.I'm not talking about this character, but add in some quirks about them! A weird hobby is always interesting. I have a character who makes screen doors and another who enjoys painting those waver fans. So, yeah.
By the way, That graphic by Kaydee was beautiful and I'd appreciate it if you would appreciate it. Not because she's Head Even Admin. But because she's one of the best members ever and she worked very hard on that.
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Post by Kitty on Jan 23, 2008 22:33:42 GMT -5
Character Name: Quakers Que McQuackWack Nickname: Quack
Description: Quack has a long, white neck and a short, white body. He has the best yellow-brown eyes in the whole pond. Geese everywhere go nuts for him. He grooms himself daily, if not hourly, and thinks very highly of himself. He prides himself on his cool, short, orange legs and beak.
History: He was made fun of at an early age in his youth, and so he learned how to reflect everyone's harsh words, and think for himself. His name also was a cause for so much humiliation. He was the only goose in the pond with the name 'Quack'. And while his mom always read him 'Chrysanthemum' and how she made it through her name, he never quite got it. So now, as an adult goose, he is very highly liked, and is very gorgeous. He still can't pride himself in his name though.
//How is it? My first Goose charrie!!!//
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Post by Kat-la on Jan 24, 2008 20:30:14 GMT -5
Name: Ryan Shawn Jameson Nickname: None Age: 18 Gender: Male
Physical Description:
Ryan is tall, towering at six foot seven inches tall, and yet he is as soft looking as velvet. His skin is dusted tan, the color of rich honey and at the age of 18 he has grown out of the pimple years of his younger years, and now is skin is smooth and flawless. His hair is dark chocolate in color, and his normal style of wearing it is spiked up and pointed towards the center with only a few pieces in the front falling onto his forehead. His eyes are dark chocolate with honey flecks around the pupil. Because Ryan exercises regularly, his torso is toned and he sports a six-pack on his daily runs. His biceps and thighs are also defined, though he does not show them off with tight clothing, opting more for jeans and comfortable tee.
He does have a pair of reading glasses that he uses on occasion, normally when his eyes are very tired. They are black wire frames and sit precariously on the bridge of his nose, so that he can look up and over them if he is reading and someone begins to talk to him. On his tan honey skin, he has a few freckles dusted across his cheeks and his shoulders. Along with his normal jeans and tee, he wears a silver chain necklace that is only slightly slacked against his neck. He also always wears a silver watch on left wrist, a roles actually.
History:
Ryan was born in a small town in Nevada, the name of the town he never learned as 4 weeks after his birth he moved to Tampa Florida. His father had gotten a new job there and his parents did not see the reason in waiting, quickly packing up and leaving their small hometown for the bustling city that Ryan would come to know and love. When Ryan was four his baby sister was born, Olivia, and his parents turned their attention to her, letting Ryan branch out in the wonderful world of a four almost five year old, until he turned six and started kindergarten. Ryan instantly took a love of learning and reading, pushing himself ahead of everyone so that he could learn more. His young mind screamed at him that it was undeveloped and he needed to learn everything in the quickest time possible. Of course, at six he did not realize how much everything WAS…but even when he did realize the size of the word everything, he was never deterred and continued on his path of self-education. Because he was so into learning, Ryan was the class geek and constantly picked on kids whose only goals in life were to be cool, and to be cool they had to pick on Ryan, and later his sister Olivia when she joined school simple on the principle of relation.
By the age of eleven Ryan was coming home every day with bruises and once a week something was sprained, fractured or even in some cases broken, so his parents pulled him out of school so he could continue his learning at home. This was where Ryan flourished. Quickly going through and comprehending things that he read, he realized he had a photographic memory and the thought amazed him. Anything he could get into his hands was something he NEEDED to read about. By the age of fifteen though, Ryan realized that knowing as much as possible was not everything and he began to care a bit how he looked and begged his parents to let him go back to normal school. He was ahead so he would be a year ahead of the people who picked on him, and he was no longer scared now. It took some convincing from both him and Olivia, but finally his parents agreed to let him go back when he turned sixteen. He would be starting as a junior in High School and would be taking advanced classes. He also did not have to worry about his sister anymore as they would not be going to the same school and she was already rising through the ranks of popularity.
Because Ryan had begun to take care in how he looked, he had begun lifting weights and working out. Not only was this so that he didn’t look like the gangly little boy he use to anymore, but also just in case some of the idiots decided he was still a good punching bag. Ryan also began acne treatments to get rid of the red and black dots that littered his face and shoulders and within a few months, his skin became the clear honey it is today. Once he was back in school, no one thought that Ryan was someone to be picked on, but rather someone to look up to and someone who could potentially be popular. Ryan on the other hand turned down the popularity and the advances of the cheerleaders who just loved how he was so smart, and secretly wanted him to do their work for them. Instead, he opted for joining clubs like the Mathletes, and Literacy Council and other academic related courses. Now that he is graduated, Ryan is dating his High School sweetheart, Lindsay, who is aspiring to become a surgeon while Ryan works hard to become a veterinarian, as his love for animals pushed him forward and past other career opportunities.
//Ok. So, I saw this and since I LOVE creating characters I thought, may as well. Ok, so Ryan is still in the works, another site I'm on...and this is clearly only a rough draft. I barely have begin to scrach the surface on his history and I know that his description could be lengthier, but I was wondering what everyone thought of him. He was done in a few minutes though, so I know a LOT of things need to be improved.//
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